Creative writing. A cooperative story


It was late in the evening when we decided to take a walk with our friends in the forest.
 It was getting darker and darker when we finally reached the castle. It was a scary and weird place, but Athanasia and I had been there before, so we wanted to show that place to our friends, as well.

We found the entrance to the castle and we got in at once! But the door, suddenly, shut by itself! We started feeling a bit strange but we tried to remain as calm as possible! The castle was huge..We didn't know which way to follow.

 Suddenly, a creepy sound was heard and a ghost appeared in front of us! We weren't afraid and we asked him who he was.  He answered to us in a polite way.  He told us that he wanted to find his son, Hamlet, and that he was his father.  We told him our story and we also adviced him to go upstairs, since we hadn't met anyone on our way in.  In fact, we told him to go to the eighth room, as we saw someone looking out from its window, so we thought that he could be Hamlet.

 He did go on the upper floor and there he met Hamlet.  He told his son the truth about his death and asked him to take revenge.  He came to us again, he seemed relieved now.  He gave twenty huge bags full of candies to each one of us to thank us:))) We were so excited! He also showed us a shorter way to go home. He was so kind and we felt sorry for his death,too!

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